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One year into the Second Civil War. Progressive and Constitutional forces forces battle for the future of the United States.
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MOOOAAAARRRR!
Thanks for the new stuff.
Moar

Bring it on!!!!
nice
Finally :-)
More please Sharkman
WOO HOO!!!!! He's back!! Looking forward to more...
Thanks
Updated up top.
Originally Posted By sharkman6:
Updated up top.
perhaps ...
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some sort of separation between postings, to make it easier for eyes to lock on.

Thank you again, good reading!

Originally Posted By Deadcenter45:
Originally Posted By sharkman6:
Updated up top.
perhaps ...
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some sort of separation between postings, to make it easier for eyes to lock on.

Thank you again, good reading!

Look for the bold an underline. Each update with start with the location of the scene. Newest update is here:
Progressive Peace Maintenance Command
Seattle, Washington
You've got me back on the hook Sharkman. Lets go go go ;-)
New post on 6/14/10
Picks up at the Support by fire position.
Holy crap.
It's a drug lab. Contain the rats with MG fire while dropping a mortar round in every building in the compound . . . for safety.
Why were they clearing buildings before that was done?
This is an uncharacteristic tactical error in my book.
Updated 06/15/10
nice
thanks
Good stuff! Thanks!
.........Mounger
Updated again. Heading in Blue.
OK . . . I get it :-)
Thanks for the update!
Looking forward to the next!
.............Mounger
Come on Sharky . . .
light the fuse on this firecracker :-)
Originally Posted By BroncoMafia:
Come on Sharky . . .
light the fuse on this firecracker :-)
Working on it. Updates above.
good stuff
YES !!!!!
That's what I'm talkin about

Thank You!
..........Mounger
Be very graphic and detailed on the coming beat down, please!

Originally Posted By oulufinn:
Be very graphic and detailed on the coming beat down, please!

Beat down above.
Very nice!
Outstanding. Alway enjoy it.
Best 20 min. of my day, Thanks
Definitely worth the wait.

Updated and completed up top.
Originally Posted By sharkman6:
Updated and completed up top.
This was fantastic Sharkman. Just awesome.
I love how you showed how the hardships Sean suffered led to emotional degradation. A rich story of the human condition and not shallow, glorified "revolution porn".
What's next?
Sharkman thanks again for sharing your talent!
Looking forward to the next one!
........Mounger
the "whole society project"... hmmm ––- methinks there is another spinoff here
bravo sir - excellent work

Great work, I hope there will be more soon!!!!!!!

Originally Posted By heron163:
the "whole society project"... hmmm ––- methinks there is another spinoff here
bravo sir - excellent work

The Whole Society Project will get tackled in the next book (book type book, 300+ pages worth like Flip) but I'm giving some hints on it in the other story I got running here which I can focus on now that this one is done.
The Whole Society folks will be an unpleasant bunch, but I'm sure Sean and Jim will find some middle-ground/common sense compromise everybody can live with.
Either that or they will just kill them.
It's people...the Whole Society elixir is...PEOPLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Originally Posted By FIELD_MP:
It's people...the Whole Society elixir is...PEOPLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So who would be Charlton Heston?
I've updated the other story here, "Never Existed," with some Whole Society action. Grab your soma tablets and your soylent green and enjoy the dystopian goodness.