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6/10/2017 9:53:13 AM EDT
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Which benefits you more, "buying" it for free or reading it with Kindle Unlimited?
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If I'm not mistaken, "Buying it" even if the price is $0.00 shows a verified purchase beside your comment when you leave a review.  Those reviews are the ones discerning shoppers tend to take more seriously.


(and I would greatly appreciate a review!)

Thank you!!




aaaaaannnnnndddd  Page 4 is now my bitch too!
6/10/2017 10:27:30 AM EDT
[#2]
Bump for dayshift
6/10/2017 10:45:51 AM EDT
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After I bought it last night I started drinking a few 120 Minute IPAs and before I know it I am a couple hours into reading the book.  Loving it so far so, how far along are you into the 2nd book of the series?  Please tell me you are not trying to become the next George R.R. Martin and we can look forward to it in 8 to 10 years.  
6/10/2017 11:56:53 AM EDT
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After I bought it last night I started drinking a few 120 Minute IPAs and before I know it I am a couple hours into reading the book.  Loving it so far so, how far along are you into the 2nd book of the series?  Please tell me you are not trying to become the next George R.R. Martin and we can look forward to it in 8 to 10 years.  
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Thank you!  This is the kind of feedback every author hopes for.  

To answer your question, The Gordian Event took me about 6 months to write the first draft.  It took another 2 years before I felt it had been polished up enough to send out to the world.  I have The Hellbender Event first draft done, and it's probably 1/3 of the way through the polish.  Without trying to sound pompous, the more I write, the better I'm get, so it shouldn't take nearly as long.  God willing, my goal is to have it ready for release sometime before January.  

My big problem is that I write when I'm inspired, and that inspiration doesn't always follow the same story line.  I have about 20 short stories and a few more novels in the works right now.  (GE Book 3 is one of them)

My vision for the Gordian series is for each book to shift genre.  Book 1 is zombie apocalypse horror.  Book 2 will be more action-adventure with sci-fi thrown in and Book 3 is shaping up to be more sci-fi with some action-adventure thrown in.  That's all I'm going to give away at this time but the project is definitely moving forward and I have high hopes.
6/10/2017 12:09:30 PM EDT
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Just got it.  I have to finish the book I am now, but will read this next.  Thank ya for the free book.
6/10/2017 12:39:15 PM EDT
[#6]
Just finished it.
Great read, worth more than the $2.00.
Don't pull a GRRM on us and take years for the next book, please.
6/10/2017 1:01:42 PM EDT
[#7]
I still can't get it.

Couldn't get it on the phone.  Had to use the laptop to send it to the phone.
6/10/2017 1:17:26 PM EDT
[#8]
I downloaded it, will get to it when I finish the current book I'm reading.
6/10/2017 1:30:36 PM EDT
[#9]
Just got it on my Kindle.


Ill let you know when I am done
6/10/2017 1:51:28 PM EDT
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Thank you!  This is the kind of feedback every author hopes for.  

To answer your question, The Gordian Event took me about 6 months to write the first draft.  It took another 2 years before I felt it had been polished up enough to send out to the world.  I have The Hellbender Event first draft done, and it's probably 1/3 of the way through the polish.  Without trying to sound pompous, the more I write, the better I'm get, so it shouldn't take nearly as long.  God willing, my goal is to have it ready for release sometime before January.  

My big problem is that I write when I'm inspired, and that inspiration doesn't always follow the same story line.  I have about 20 short stories and a few more novels in the works right now.  (GE Book 3 is one of them)

My vision for the Gordian series is for each book to shift genre.  Book 1 is zombie apocalypse horror.  Book 2 will be more action-adventure with sci-fi thrown in and Book 3 is shaping up to be more sci-fi with some action-adventure thrown in.  That's all I'm going to give away at this time but the project is definitely moving forward and I have high hopes.
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Just like me. The more Solitaire I play, the better I getz.

Ed
6/10/2017 2:05:13 PM EDT
[#11]
Just finished it
I liked it a lot
Gonna go try and do the amazon review thing
6/10/2017 2:07:15 PM EDT
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I'm offering 1 lightly used pmag as a bounty for whoever finds the first spelling error.
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LOL, there are a ton of them. Pick something harder.
6/10/2017 3:19:39 PM EDT
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I LOVE YOU GUYS!!!!!!!!


I have 2 certified Arfcom reviews on the book now!  Thank you all so much!


To the reviewers:

I agree that chili certainly must have beans!

and

I've heard that if you read my book 87 times something magical will happen.
6/10/2017 4:25:59 PM EDT
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where's that delete button on my kindle?



6/10/2017 5:13:03 PM EDT
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Moose, I was born and raised in Arizona.  Chili has beans.


6/10/2017 5:14:18 PM EDT
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I just bought the paper version. Ill never read it if its on my computer.
6/10/2017 5:22:19 PM EDT
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NSB, has D_J contacted you yet?

Day 5, Morning:  "Jess bumped her first on her knee twice"


The scary part is that I had 7 editors (4 are professional editors) and multiple grammer/spelling programs running.  And shit STILL got missed!
6/10/2017 5:26:51 PM EDT
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I just bought the paper version. Ill never read it if its on my computer.
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Awww!  Thank you!!  
6/10/2017 5:30:23 PM EDT
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Congrats op. And thanks for sharing it.  Downloaded it to my Kindle, will make sure to post a review.

Txl
6/10/2017 5:31:42 PM EDT
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Congrats op. And thanks for sharing it.  Downloaded it to my Kindle, will make sure to post a review.

Txl
6/10/2017 5:36:03 PM EDT
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NSB, has D_J contacted you yet?

Day 5, Morning:  "Jess bumped her first on her knee twice"


The scary part is that I had 7 editors (4 are professional editors) and multiple grammer/spelling programs running.  And shit STILL got missed!
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LOL I wonder what Professional Grammar Nazi pays? We've got some good ones around, fo sho. I just had to give you some shit after you jinxed yourself.
6/10/2017 6:18:24 PM EDT
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LOL I wonder what Professional Grammar Nazi pays? We've got some good ones around, fo sho. I just had to give you some shit after you jinxed yourself.
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I don't know about their hourly wage, but for the size of my book, it's about $600.  Professional Grammar Nazi is expensive--the more sheepskins, the more $$.


(I'm totally enjoying the razzing.  I knew that there were going to be typos--you'd be hard pressed to find a 400 page book without a few, and nobody with thin skin should be an author)
6/10/2017 6:20:19 PM EDT
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NSB, has D_J contacted you yet?

Day 5, Morning:  "Jess bumped her first on her knee twice"


The scary part is that I had 7 editors (4 are professional editors) and multiple grammer/spelling programs running.  And shit STILL got missed!
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Wow.
6/10/2017 6:26:52 PM EDT
[#24]
Coolio. Downloaded, will read at some point. I got like 5 other books to get through first though. 
6/10/2017 6:28:53 PM EDT
[#25]
Downloaded.

Warning though, I will be leaving a review, and I am a brutal, but honest reviewer, as some other arfcommers have found out to their dismay.
6/10/2017 6:37:08 PM EDT
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Downloaded.

Warning though, I will be leaving a review, and I am a brutal, but honest reviewer, as some other arfcommers have found out to their dismay.
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6/10/2017 7:25:53 PM EDT
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Wow.  This isn't the Arfcom I remember.


There hasn't been a purse swung, or a mean post in this whole thread!



I luv you guys!!!  Thank you all so very much!



(and yes, I just put a hex on the whole thing--BRING ON THE ASSHATS!!!!)
I'm offering 1 lightly used pmag as a bounty for whoever finds the first spelling error.
Found it and IM'd the author hours ago.

Jess bumped her first on her knee twice
ETA - guess I should have finished the thread before responding.
6/10/2017 7:39:57 PM EDT
[#28]
Downloading it in the Kindle app now.  Can't wait to report back!  Good on you OP, I struggle to put words on screen.   You're an inspiration
6/10/2017 8:48:01 PM EDT
[#29]
I'm about ten percent in.

Seems ambitious in detail, a lot of moving parts, and it's definitely got that arfcom flavor to it, not just the gun stuff but how self defense is handled. Does not seem like simple wish fulfillment like sooooo many first novels are.

I'm quite enjoying it so far.
6/10/2017 9:06:02 PM EDT
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Thanks for the Free offer, but I bought it anyway.......just because!
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Yeah, I kept thinking about all the work that went into it and decided 3 bucks was a deal.
6/10/2017 9:51:41 PM EDT
[#31]
How DO you download it
I don't have a kindle BUT I believe I can read it on my iMac.
6/10/2017 9:57:13 PM EDT
[#32]
Just picked it up. Looking forward to the read and a review.
6/10/2017 10:14:58 PM EDT
[#33]
I'm only seeing the Kindle Unlimited subscription version, and I've even tried doing a search for other dl versions.
6/10/2017 11:34:11 PM EDT
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https://www.amazon.com/dp/B072JWY1RV?tag=vglnk-c102-20

This work for you?  It is for kindle only, but it is not the unlimited subscription one.
6/10/2017 11:36:48 PM EDT
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How DO you download it
I don't have a kindle BUT I believe I can read it on my iMac.
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You would need the Kindle App on whatever device you are trying to read it on attached to your amazon account.  You can put it on your phone, or computer.  Then when you go to purchase it, it should ask you which device you want to send it to.  Then open the kindle app and have it sync, or whatever they call it.
6/10/2017 11:49:44 PM EDT
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I just got a kindle last week so i will get your book.we have to support our own people
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You're going to love your kindle.  I often wonder how I ever got along without it.
6/11/2017 12:01:03 AM EDT
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You're going to love your kindle.  I often wonder how I ever got along without it.
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I just use the kindle app on my Ipadtato. Works great. Though I'm still trying to break myself from dog-earing the pages after all these years


Ed
6/11/2017 12:20:48 AM EDT
[#38]
I don't do ebooks.  Is there a place to buy the paperback?
6/11/2017 6:25:45 AM EDT
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I'm about ten percent in.

Seems ambitious in detail, a lot of moving parts, and it's definitely got that arfcom flavor to it, not just the gun stuff but how self defense is handled. Does not seem like simple wish fulfillment like sooooo many first novels are.

I'm quite enjoying it so far.
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Happy to hear this!  I hope you enjoy the rest.
6/11/2017 6:32:30 AM EDT
[#40]
Congratulations! Downloading it right now to check it out.
6/11/2017 6:33:36 AM EDT
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I don't want to post the link here because it would be free advertising and against CoC.  I sent you a PM.

Thanks for the interest!
6/11/2017 6:37:49 AM EDT
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Hey FerFal!  I read your SHTF adventures over at FrugalSquirrel many moons ago!

(Your recommendation was among some of the reasons I switched my EDC from the 1911 to Glocks)

I hope you enjoy my story as much as I enjoyed your blog
6/11/2017 6:54:55 AM EDT
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How DO you download it
I don't have a kindle BUT I believe I can read it on my iMac.
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I don't have an iMac, but this is what I found:

https://www.amazon.com/gp/help/customer/display?tag=vglnk-c102-20.html?nodeId=200438360

If you go to my book on Amazon, there is a small block under the cover art on the left side of the screen that says 'Read on any device. Get free Kindle app'.  

Hope that helps, and thank you for the interest!
6/11/2017 7:29:12 AM EDT
[#44]
Downloaded and reading it now.  Pretty good!  Will definitely leave a review
6/11/2017 5:55:35 PM EDT
[#45]
I'm halfway through.
2 thoughts.
Fucking awesome so far and I don't usually like the gore/horror stuff.
And
I really like stories set in places I'm familiar with adds a whole other level of depth to the imagery for me. So being born and raised in Phoenix this is awesome!
6/12/2017 2:34:44 AM EDT
[#46]
Just finished and left a review! Couldn't quit reading. 5 hours til I gotta be up for work.
6/12/2017 2:56:26 AM EDT
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Finished.

Seems rather Lovecraftian, even though I haven't read too much of his stuff.

Found a couple of typos, Virgil's name was misspelled as his character was "leaving" the story and near the end the word naval was used as opposed to navel. Also the moment where they are talking about snakes, stars and the collapse of civilizations seemed like a real "God (or perhaps Satan) of the gaps" moment. Understandable for characters in a story, but civilizations don't just go bye bye without an explanation.

I rated it as a 4/5. Bit too much gorn for my taste and seemed like it was too much of a setup for a future story as opposed to being its own thing. I have that complaint about A LOT of books and movies and whatnot nowadays.
6/12/2017 3:48:20 AM EDT
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Just downloaded it. At work now, so can't start it till I get off at 0800.
Thanks for the free download.
6/12/2017 3:54:25 AM EDT
[#49]
First I'd like to say thanks for the free book! It was a great read, I thought you did a very good job of bringing the characters personalities out and making most of them likeable. ( I didn't care much for Sam lol) I read the whole book in about 4 hours, couldn't seem to put it down. Overall I thought it was a great book, the one part that didn't sit to well with me was the ending, it seemed somewhat anticlimactic to me. I expected more from the people in the boats, it all just seemed like it was over to quickly. I don't want to say to much for the people that haven't read it yet and please don't take my criticism in the wrong light, I'm not trying to be negative I really did like the book. Just wanted to share my honest feelings about it, I read a lot but not usually books of this genre. Once again thanks for the book and you did an excellent job!!
6/12/2017 5:11:39 AM EDT
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Congrats on your first book release! Just got it on Kindle.

Congrats on another accomplishment BTW. I love my Kindle ever since I finally got one 2 Xmas'es ago, but resisted putting the Kindle app on my phone. Being out of town and seeing your book release thread finally made me DL the Kindle app on my phone.

Sheesh, I coulda saved the Kindle money. The app on the phone is GREAT, and even easier to hold than the Kindle.

Will be sure to leave a review on Amazon when I've finished the book.

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