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Posted: 7/10/2007 4:38:37 PM EDT

I'm cross listing this as there's a lot of folks in FL who might have some input on this. Anyhow, I appreciate any assistance folks might be able to give, and I'm happy to post the writing sample itself if that will help. Additionally, if this gets printed, 10% of all sales proceeds will go to the Special Operations Warrior Foundation on behalf of AR-15.com and its members.

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Posted: 7/10/2007 5:24:58 PM EDT

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See IM...

Posted: 7/10/2007 8:15:34 PM EDT

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I'd love to (proof)read some of your writing!

Posted: 7/12/2007 11:10:59 AM EDT

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I'd love to (proof)read some of your writing!

Here's the link for the first chapter.

Chapter 1

Posted: 7/12/2007 11:36:20 AM EDT

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I'd love to (proof)read some of your writing!

Might not be a good idea...Punani's primary language is all consonants and no vowels.

Posted: 7/12/2007 12:02:52 PM EDT

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Quoted:
I'd love to (proof)read some of your writing!

Might not be a good idea...Punani's primary language is all consonants and no vowels.

Not only can I read it, I can pronounce it!

Posted: 7/12/2007 12:07:51 PM EDT

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Quoted:

Quoted:
I'd love to (proof)read some of your writing!

Might not be a good idea...Punani's primary language is all consonants and no vowels.

www.tchain.com/otoneurology/images/eye-chart.jpg

Not only can I read it, I can pronounce it!

You are lucky I couldn't find the dutch "I want to buy a hammer" video.

Posted: 7/12/2007 12:50:23 PM EDT

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Quoted:

Quoted:
I'd love to (proof)read some of your writing!

Might not be a good idea...Punani's primary language is all consonants and no vowels.

www.tchain.com/otoneurology/images/eye-chart.jpg

Not only can I read it, I can pronounce it!

You are lucky I couldn't find the dutch "I want to buy a hammer" video.

Perhaps you should read this.

Posted: 7/12/2007 12:55:59 PM EDT

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Quoted:

Quoted:
I'd love to (proof)read some of your writing!

Might not be a good idea...Punani's primary language is all consonants and no vowels.

www.tchain.com/otoneurology/images/eye-chart.jpg

Not only can I read it, I can pronounce it!

You are lucky I couldn't find the dutch "I want to buy a hammer" video.

Perhaps you should read this.

www.atouchofdutch.com/images/Dutch%20dummies.png

I just spit half chewed peanuts on my monitor!!

Can you really say "hagelslag" while spitting?

Posted: 7/12/2007 1:11:28 PM EDT

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Sorry about the Hijack, Writer!!

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